"Пылай, меч!" - техническое.

Опять поэзия! Мало нам было господина замкома, теперь еще и господин военный советник песни слагает. Говорят, талантливо.
Люди, кто знает - что пишет Ито Каситаро: форма, размер, правила игры?..

Ангельский вариант:

Ито Каситаро

1. I left behind more than trees have leaves

parting with it all, like I brush white dew from this sleeve

Now, I must sing about the feelings in my heart toward this world I live in

and if I am to provide earnest service to my Lord

then I must scatter my own heart as if it were my greatest enemy


2. from where do we come, to where do we go

may I and my allies also someday rest in peace

like the one under this monument on this mossy bank


3. countless

bodies fallen upon the autumn field

lost, sleeping away from home

all for the sake of the country


4. if a man dies in his quest to become a protector of the Emperor in this disheveled, back-haired world

should we mourn him, as he is blown along by the spring wind, to bloom alongside the mountain sakura?


И Хидзиката в придачу:

May clouds, hurrying towards my homeland

Краткость - сестра таланта, вот что я думаю.